Final test for Typography. Font launching poster. I choose Helvetica as my font. Thank you DeviantArt for giving me so much Typography references and inspirations
Awesome man. I made a work very similar to this (choose a font and then make a poster about it) but I choose Impact. Its in my gallery if you want to take a look. Keep up the good work.
Other than the orphan on the light grey paragraph in the bottom left... this is an awesome piece! Very Swiss Modernist design feel with a current day feel! I like it! Maybe take a look at the ragged line on the blue paragraph... some of the hyphens can be taken out to balance out the ragged line, like when it says: Munchenstein, Swit– zerland Take Swit onto the next line and it should balance better. Have you considered a slightly bigger border?
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Wow ! Hey there ! Thank you so much for the support criticism. I do really need it. Yes, I currently in the 2nd semester on my campus and I just get the Typography subject. My reference is more in to Swiss Style, that I'll study on the 4th semester.
I just follow the typical design on Swiss style to my work. And yeah, I confess that I don't really look at the detail of the paragraph because I just want the paragraph straight with the big letters without checking the small details.
But thank you so much for the advices and criticism. I will study layout Typography for the next semester, just wish me luck. Thank you
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Keep up the good work.
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Maybe take a look at the ragged line on the blue paragraph... some of the hyphens can be taken out to balance out the ragged line, like when it says: Munchenstein, Swit– zerland
Take Swit onto the next line and it should balance better.
Have you considered a slightly bigger border?
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"CHANGE THE WAY YOU LOOK AT THINGS AND THE THINGS YOU LOOK AT CHANGE"
I just follow the typical design on Swiss style to my work. And yeah, I confess that I don't really look at the detail of the paragraph because I just want the paragraph straight with the big letters without checking the small details.
But thank you so much for the advices and criticism. I will study layout Typography for the next semester, just wish me luck. Thank you
--
"The sound of invitation is rising, waiting for you to come... It's time for you to:
Visit #indonesia."
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"CHANGE THE WAY YOU LOOK AT THINGS AND THE THINGS YOU LOOK AT CHANGE"
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"The sound of invitation is rising, waiting for you to come... It's time for you to:
Visit #indonesia."